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on New Lily Allen! at 23:19 10/23/2008I agree with Perez, the chorus of this song needs help. In its current form there is no variation from verse to chorus in the melody line. If it were to kick it up to something similar to the chorus starting point in Since You've Been Gone to get the necessary variation and tie it into the instrumental line at the end of the chorus. That really isn't her style though, so I can't see it happening. Its a good experimental idea for a song, but needs more work.

